She wondered why this was considered so evil. The darkness that surrounded her did not by any means seem scary or wicked to her.Why was everyone afraid then ? She loved it. She seemed to be moving along with it rather she preferred to call it floating. There was something about the darkness that made her feel safe. She wondered, did not our ancestors live in darkness during the longer part of the day. Were they all scared? What made us feel so scared? Is it because we cannot see what lies beyond the darkness? Yes she decided, its the fear of the unknown that scares us.
She paced through the house in darkness with nothing but her intuitions telling her which direction to take and not hit the walls. She did not even have the mobile phone to give her the necessary light. The charge had worn out. So much for technology , these things always back out on you when you need them most.She swore under her breath.She found the candles and the candle stand that he had gifted her. She tried to remember the day when he gave it to her. It was such an adorable candle stand.She never had the heart to use them. The very thought of the day brought a smile to her face.
Darkness always had a way with emotions. It made you think of all the melancholy phases you have been through. It makes you reflect on you past, ponder over your present and build air castles of your future.You have so many thoughts racing in your mind that you are quite confounded thinking you could actually have so many !! Had there been power these thoughts would have escaped you as easily as the bug that escapes your testing..You would then be most probably watching the 250th time repeat of the same news that day in NDTV or a soap opera in which the director went mad because there were no more people in the world left for these people to get married to and then get divorced .
She paced through the house in darkness with nothing but her intuitions telling her which direction to take and not hit the walls. She did not even have the mobile phone to give her the necessary light. The charge had worn out. So much for technology , these things always back out on you when you need them most.She swore under her breath.She found the candles and the candle stand that he had gifted her. She tried to remember the day when he gave it to her. It was such an adorable candle stand.She never had the heart to use them. The very thought of the day brought a smile to her face.
Darkness always had a way with emotions. It made you think of all the melancholy phases you have been through. It makes you reflect on you past, ponder over your present and build air castles of your future.You have so many thoughts racing in your mind that you are quite confounded thinking you could actually have so many !! Had there been power these thoughts would have escaped you as easily as the bug that escapes your testing..You would then be most probably watching the 250th time repeat of the same news that day in NDTV or a soap opera in which the director went mad because there were no more people in the world left for these people to get married to and then get divorced .
She lit the candle successfully after waging a war with the match box and the match sticks. He looked at her from the other side of the candle and looked at her face in the candle light. Her features seemed ever so beautiful. The darkness seemed to have accentuated her beauty. He told her "Its not fair that you look so beautiful". She just smiled. " Now I don't think we need any power at all. That smile of yours just lit up the house".
She just hit him in the head lovingly and wondered when was the last time he had told her that. well not in a really long time. She wondered what was it about darkness that made us realise the beauty in the small offings of life.Appreciating the little things that bring a smile to us.She wondered if darkness really was the absence of light, absence of happiness, devoid of life for she had not felt this happy in a really long time, she had not felt this full of life with the best of brightness.Irony, she did not think so.
p.s : G thanks for the hint that i should try this topic!!
16 comments:
beautiful!! jus truly beautiful they way you had narrated a simple five minute incident with some so much of power in your words....
"its the fear of the unknown that scares us."-so true n yet so profound....
I have personally experienced that power cuts do bring all the people in the house together...there is a unique charm abt it!! and you have brought that out so well!!
kudos! keep them coming!
d mid portion of the last para ... really romantic ...."Its not fair that you look so beautiful" ..tis line s jus sooo gooooooooood..loved it
good post !!
the post is simply wondeful....at the start i was jus thinking if it was getting stereotype etc...but then the suddent non-platonic twist was beautiful....
[i]Appreciating the little things that bring a smile to us.[/i]
:-)
Awesome post..very beautifully written!! Good title!!
Luved d followin lines..They r so beautiful n romantic!!!
" He told her "Its not fair that you look so beautiful". She just smiled. " Now I don't think we need any power at all. That smile of yours just lit up the house". "
Hats off!! Keep em comin!!
Awesome.. too good.
I guess the chennai power cuts are making you more and more creative. ;)
Whoooooaaaaa....
So much for throwing light on darkness :-)
Its simple how life seems when we look at the simplest things and remember the complex of thoughts. Darkness is in itself a complex thought but you made it appear so simple.
"It makes you reflect on you past, ponder over your present and build air castles of your future."
Someone should get this engraved somewhere.....this is classic.
"Had there been power these thoughts would have escaped you as easily as the bug that escapes your testing."
Haa haa..we people never seem to get tired of posting our professional crap :-)
Nivi.. I would just put it this way.. this post of yours is the closest a post can ever get for me personally :-). I just looooooooooove darkness.. and I would like to know who this she is though.. ;-). But I guess she is married :D. And hey you know whats great about this post.. u bring such a though provoking thing in such a simple way… I just cant figure out how you do it.. “ it’s the fear of unknown which scares us”.. How did u put that so simply yet so thought provoking
Hey I liked the idea of bringing the mobile phone thingy .. sure that’s a real life experience :-). But true yaar technology never works when u need it most. When has the remote worked when u r in the most comfortable position on the couch? When hasn’t the computer crashed when you were listening to your fav. Music.
“ Bug that escapes your testing” .. now I know where that comes from :-).. and this pacticularly had me in splits “250th time repeat of the same news that day in NDTV or a soap opera in which the director went mad because there were no more people in the world left for these people to get married to and then get divorced .” ha ha.. and btw don’t you think darkness is a way of getting a family together too . what do you think. When the power goes don’t we all sit together and chat..otherwise all of them would be stuck in their own melancholy chores right?.
Btw the I loved the transition from darkness to romance.. that’s a masterpiece nivi.. that’s what I often mean when I say you got the flow pal. And trust me I am floored by these two sentences “Its not fair that you look so beautiful". She just smiled. " Now I don't think we need any power at all. That smile of yours just lit up the house"… I Will definitely use it on someone sometime ;-)… and what a way to end… what a way to bring two contrasting viewpoint about one thing in one sentence. I think I am getting repetitive.. but doesn’t matter.. Super, awesome, really really romantic… You arer on my list of favourite author[ please note I am using the singular tense here:-) ]
One request.. just like this post do add what triggered to think of this topic.. its nice to know :-)
Quite astounding how you can give so much life to something as routine as a power cut! wow, Nivi! You truly are pedigree! I love blogs that are outward looking... and yours is one!!
You totally have a wonderful relationship with words. You add so much color to stories. I loved this line btw: "She wondered if darkness really was the absence of light, absence of happiness, devoid of life for she had not felt this happy in a really long time, she had not felt this full of life with the best of brightness.Irony, she did not think so" -- sometimes I do wonder the same!
i hereby confer u the title.. the "god of all trivial things".. u make interesting stories out of mundane events..
@anu
Its true isnt ...ANd quite charming :)
@sathish
I knew u would like it!
@ak
I am glad i surprised you. :-)
@navien
Thanks :-)
I will try
@Jagdeep
Yeah, i think they are.
@harish
Thanks man!
So true.. ts a part of our life.. how can we leave that behind
@adithya
Hey i knew u would like it and i am glad u noticed the subtle things
@goragori
Thanks gowri. Really :-)
@princess
Wow thanks a ton! And I wonder too
@karthik
dude thanks for the title.
Should i put that before my posts from now on ;-)
Romantic is one word that sums this post... no in the literal but in a literary sense... I found myself imagining a beautiful lady whoseface ihave never seen and thw words "The darkness seemed to have accentuated her beauty." was simply super duper!!!
Nivi .. u r gettin too good especially with puttin human emotions and thoughts into words... ther have been many a times wen i hav tried to do thta but jus get flooded with flurry of thoughts that i cud hardly represent them well in an orderly manner... this is an aspect i have seen a great improvemnt in ur posts.. thanks to all the work from nivi rasigar mandram... I said al lthis cos of these 2 lines:
"Darkness always had a way with emotions. It made you think of all the melancholy phases you have been through. It makes you reflect on you past, ponder over your present and build air castles of your future." - i read these over and over again and simply seem to adore these lines... i have felt the same way myself too..!!
The words u used to bring about the sweet intimacy between the him and the her was wowwie.. i liked ur style!
"Irony, she did not think so."- the neirepost wud have losts its feel had it not been for these lines...
Cheers... this has scored above "Aham Sarvam"
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